Ideas for Chapter 5

ARRGH!!!  When I added the villian, the plot went wild.  I don't know where its going anymore.  I see large plot directions, and I see small ones as well.  Motivations for all the protaginists are about to change, as well as their goals.   More characters have jumped onto the scene.  Who the hell is Duucann, and why is he helping the mage attack Iial?  Did the mage make the firewalkers or are they part of what Duucann brought?

What did the mage promise the firesprite that made him want to help?  Its obvious the sprite isn't controled by the mage.  Does he have another agenda that he isn't telling anyone?  Just who's side is he on, or is he on his own side?

With a plot so out of control, I guess it'll be fun to find where the story leads us.

I'll think about this idea a bit more and let it incubate.

Other ideas I've thought about are:

• Find a nice way to get both Ionua and Nalua some new clothes.
• Nalua would make a nice thief/acrobat and maybe get into trouble all the time, get bound up and and Malik has to bail her out.
• Add in another character for the quest.  I'm thinking a nice cleric or something.  Maybe a nice priestess of the sex goddess.  Or maybe a Ranger, or warrior.  Who knows maybe even a friendly elf?  So far the party has a Knight/Warrior, a healer/mage/sorceress, and a thief/acrobat.  If you have any suggestions just email me.
• Gotta get Ionua a spell book or two so she can learn to be a mage.  Maybe even a war mage.  Might go nicely with her other talents.  But since she was training to be a mage and has shown a talent to be a sorceress, maybe she'd combine the two and become a wizardess (which is both sorcery and magery).  Maybe she has to make a deal with Kimik to borrow a book from his library?
• I could let Malik be mean to Nalua and have her tied up all the time.  And maybe even shave off her pubic hair.  We all know how much cat's hate that.  Walk her nude through town all bound up and helpless.  I don't know about this.  Nalua will be a member of the party and this is too un-consentual for my tastes, and probably Maliks.
• Have Malik meet a girl at Kimik's castle that is a harem girl and wears clothes that are hopeless in covering her body.  Maybe have her become part of the party?  Though I don't know what as.  A harem girl probably wouldn't be a warrior.  Maybe she'd be their ready medic, or an initiate sex priestess.  Maybe make have another cleric be for the knowledge and prophecy or for the Work, farming, craftsmanship god or goddess and she's always teasing and taunting the conservative priest with her uninhibited ways.  She'd probably get along with Ionua cause of a similar role in society.

If you have any random ideas that you want to give me, I'd welcome them.  I'm not good at ideas right now unfortunately.

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